Hello all you lovely peeps in Internet Land! 🙂
My toothfairy book is 70% ready to print-ish…still sorta stumbling my way through that whole process…but Youtube is my Friend. Lols
So, I decided to tackle the Very First book I’d ever written. I’m going back over it, editing it. I wanted a second opinion, so I took it to my critique group. They enjoyed the actual storyline and wanted to hear more….but I had one Massively Glaring Error that I hadn’t Picked up on…probs cause I see the whole story laid out in my head. Lols
…..It has a Terrible case of the Head Hops!!! 😮
Ohhhhhh, Good Grief!! I am soo totes not happy right now.:(
Like I said before, this is the first book I had ever written. I started it like 3 years ago…I’ve learned a ton since then so I knew there would be probs…but Why’d it have to Head Hopping. 😮 Ack!
I usually write in first person…it’s my preferred mode of writing. But this story is in third person…I am soooooo not good at writing in third person. Plehs! 😦
Whew! I can do this…If Indy handled snakes, I can diagnose and correct my head hopping ishes….right? I hope? Lols XD
Apparently I will be immersing myself in research and development on How to fix my Ish! Again, Youtube is my Friend. 😉
Wish me Luck!
The Bluemoon Thinker 🙂